Ch. 11 Page 16
dragonsong12 on Nov. 15, 2009
ANOTHER scene change? What's that all about, Dragonsong? You need to go back to editing school, you should know better than to keep randomly cutting like this!
Sheesh!
Though I have to admit, I think you did a decent job in the first panel. Feels kinda like a woods for once.
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…anyway…I think there are some interesting things on this page (no, really!) but I think I over-explain things a lot of the time, so I'll just sit on my hands for once…well…as much as I can….since I'm typing…
Thanks for reading! See you next week!
HawkandFloAdventures at 3:18PM, Dec. 26, 2022
run run Rudolph you got to make it to town!
kaiyaweird at 8:27PM, Nov. 19, 2009
Can't wait for the next page!
SweetSong at 5:48PM, Nov. 17, 2009
Personally, I like how you keep skipping between the characters. It gives a strong sense of simultaneous-ness.
Mikato at 1:53PM, Nov. 16, 2009
Poor Bradley he isnt doing too good.
Cthonic Cultist at 10:00PM, Nov. 15, 2009
Bradley isn't looking well. Perhaps a bit of a lie down would help, hmm?