Ch 11 Page 20

dragonsong12 on Dec. 13, 2009

And look who we found! Seems like they’re coming together a bit now.

I know these past few pages have been kinda dull, and there’s still a couple more to go to the end of the chapter. I didn’t want to move it too quickly. Sometimes I worry that the comic moves too quickly and changes scenes too suddenly. It doesn’t always make as much sense going from scene to scene when read all at once rather than in a page at a time, so I decided to let this scene play out, even though it’s a bit dull.

Next chapter should have plenty of action, though. I’m not sure how good it will be, like I said, this chapter and the next were the part of the story I was most concerned with, but I like to think I’ve thought them through well enough that it’ll be entertaining, so I hope you stick with me!

Sorry for the delay, Drunk Duck’s posting was down last night.
Thanks for reading! See you next week!