Ch. 12 Page 12
dragonsong12 on April 4, 2010
And they continue to yell at each other! Whoo! If there were dialogue, though it would probably just be Tren yelling “GETTHE$#@*!AWAYFROMME!” over and over.
I'm really happy with how this page looks, though. I think it came out really nice. It might be my favorite of this chapter!
We're just about done with the fight now. Hang in there. :D
Also, I've got my internet back at last! Hopefully, I'll get some time to play with the TM mirror site and get that figured out and working. So that the next time DD goes down, we don;t have to worry.
Thanks for reading, see you next week.
HawkandFloAdventures at 3:41PM, Dec. 26, 2022
This is intense dang you stepped you your action! :D
dragonsong12 at 7:52PM, Dec. 26, 2022
It's a bit confusing. Still trying to work to make things clear in action...but the ACTION part is happening now at least. ^^;
Bluesox at 8:16AM, April 12, 2010
YeAH!
crocodile___smile at 2:13PM, April 5, 2010
fighting is never pretty. good job on recreating a sense of just how messy and awful it is! most comics strive to make the blows look as neat and as streamlined as possible. there's a sense of physical realism permeating this fight scene (even though the story itself, of course, is far from realistic...)