page 6
Mistchiff on Jan. 26, 2009
this page was quite troublesome compared to the previous once i. dident dare do some of the texting and such after the character inking.
the first panel was the most troublesome i ended up doing 5 shots of this same drawing making it the best it could be i wanted to keep kawlons shape yet. keep him hidden. with out having it look sloopy.
so i ended up with what you see here.
Mistchiff at 10:29AM, Jan. 27, 2009
yeah the eyes is a great inpspiration of windwaker works damn well with elven characters i found the nose aswell is a detail i also snatched. Dont call this a style its a choice of design =D for this imparticular story.
theorah at 10:16AM, Jan. 27, 2009
Good stuff so far! :) It is nice to see someone doing a comic that is truley no more then a bit of fun, and isnt afriad to say so :) Your artwork, pacing and characters are charming and very nicely done, good job! ^_^ Your spelling isnt that bad, I can certainly get by/get the idea. If you really want help though I will add suggestions as the comic goes along :P
Kinuchio at 10:07AM, Jan. 27, 2009
I really dig this. Your style sorta reminds me of zelda wind waker. xD Also, I dunno if you care about grammar as far as commas are concerned, but in the last panel, there should be a comma after master because he's addressing him. Keep it up dude. Faved.