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Banes on Oct. 18, 2017

Wade as a PI? May have to do THAT story down the road sometime. Look for a hint of that in a little comic awards show, actually… :)

I believe bravo called this somewhere around page ONE of this story. heh heh!

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Szyszka666 at 8:26AM, Nov. 20, 2017

Now that's a great idea, Oscar! Hopefully the store will make some profit so oscar is able to pay the debt :D

Banes at 2:56PM, Feb. 2, 2018

Movie rentals could be a tough go - maybe in comic land it's a more reasonable investment...

Peipei at 10:40PM, Oct. 23, 2017

Wow! What a pleasant turn of events!

Banes at 2:59PM, Oct. 24, 2017

that's how we construct our page turners around here, Peipei! ;)

PIT_FACE at 9:30AM, Oct. 21, 2017

Time for anarchy!

Banes at 5:09PM, Oct. 21, 2017

word! s'time to tear this playhouse down!

cdmalcolm1 at 9:03PM, Oct. 19, 2017

Wow. That is great! who's the boss now?

Banes at 8:18AM, Oct. 20, 2017

thanks cd! there's still another page or two to this story and then it will keep going - the command structure will settle into some form in the upcoming chapters!

ejb at 3:19PM, Oct. 19, 2017

"I sure hope you applied for enough jobs for all of us.... 'cause if you didn't..." *fist shake*

Banes at 8:19AM, Oct. 20, 2017

HAHAHA! You know, that's a good point. I didn't think of that - what were they expecting?

ghostrunner at 8:19PM, Oct. 18, 2017

nice!

Banes at 8:59PM, Oct. 18, 2017

thanks ghostie!

KimLuster at 12:49PM, Oct. 18, 2017

True, Bravo has guessed(?) my plot direction an unnerving number of times... Of course, this is the moment when everyone says... 'Uh... Heya Oscar ol' Buddy...*big smiles and blinkin' eyes*... I do wonder if Oscar will try modernize the store's theme to account for the digital age... But... I can see them all still trying to sell rentals and wonder why they're not getting ahead :D

Banes at 3:28PM, Oct. 18, 2017

Maybe he'll restructure the place to sell typewriter ribbons?

Banes at 3:27PM, Oct. 18, 2017

He's a clever sort, that bravo! I've thought a lot about how to address the quaint/obsolete nature of the business in this story. I have two or three approaches in mind - and I think I'll take all three in the coming pages and stories :D

El Cid at 2:34AM, Oct. 18, 2017

Oh gawd, this is a perfect sitcom ending! Everything changes, but also stays the same! I wonder, will Oscar be corrupted by his newfound power?

Banes at 3:24PM, Oct. 18, 2017

Exactly! Cue the "what would we do, baby...without us...sha la la laaaa..." Yeah, can Oscar's ego handle this kind of ultimate Authority??? We'll have to see!

Ozoneocean at 1:45AM, Oct. 18, 2017

Bravo is a bastard for spoilers, you have to change your story JUST to confound him! That was unexpected for me at least. I loved Abigail's fantasy! You art style is always getting cooler man and your use of colour too. You'll have to re-do your header image of the characters in your new style ;)

Banes at 3:23PM, Oct. 18, 2017

Thanks oz! Yeah, maybe it's time for a redo on that...

jerrie at 12:43AM, Oct. 18, 2017

heh...Oscar becomes Abby's BOSS! Wade...PI??????? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Banes at 3:22PM, Oct. 18, 2017

That's right; Oscar as the boss has surely got some stories and challenges for him and the others! I have some ideas of things that will happen, but for others I'll have to figure it out as we go!

jerrie at 12:43AM, Oct. 18, 2017

way to go Oscar!!!!

Banes at 3:23PM, Oct. 18, 2017

thanks jerrie! I'm kinda proud of the guy myself! xD

bravo1102 at 12:12AM, Oct. 18, 2017

I know the Clerks influence and this was the whole outcome of Clerks 2. But in this age of downloads can they make It? By the way the original store is still there but they made the sign a teeny bit bigger so you can see it from the highway.

Banes at 3:14PM, Oct. 18, 2017

Clerks 2 is definitely the inspiration for this! Good call on the digital revolution. Have these kids heard about it?? That's cool; I would have visited the store in my younger days if I'd had the dough!

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