Typical Strange on The Duck : What's the Story page 25

Jason Moon at 5:36PM, May 4, 2020

Just on the run with the writer of my life

Banes at 6:09AM, May 5, 2020

sounds like a country song. Or maybe, like an alt-rock thing.

ejb at 6:38AM, May 1, 2020

Ooh, there are grimy back alleys even in Story Fabrication Land.

Banes at 11:06AM, May 1, 2020

Maybe old ideas are tossed there?

Banes at 11:05AM, May 1, 2020

hahaha!

jerrie at 4:41PM, April 18, 2020

you can WIN this Oscar...TK is a casualty of war! Carry on Oscar!!!!

Banes at 5:52PM, April 18, 2020

Yes! He must carry on!

Tantz_Aerine at 9:54PM, April 17, 2020

INTENSE! Even more so with the lack of sound effects and words.

Tantz_Aerine at 2:48AM, April 19, 2020

That's a great point!

Banes at 7:30AM, April 18, 2020

haha - it's funny; almost every page of yours that I read, I want to say 'INTENSE'. And I mean it! I do think that taking out the dialogue and sound is often effective. There have been a few pages that I either took it out, or later decide I should have. Sometimes the dialogue and sound sells the action; sometimes it detracts. Thanks again!

Peipei at 7:36PM, April 16, 2020

I'd say that being chased by an angry mob of hairy men is straight up nightmare fuel! x.X

Banes at 7:46PM, April 16, 2020

I can't disagree with that! xD

El Cid at 1:17PM, April 16, 2020

Action-packed! They should be safe there; this is a normal foot mob, not one of those pitchfork mobs. If it were a pitchfork mob, this totally wouldn't work; they're way more thorough.

Banes at 7:46PM, April 16, 2020

I can support that theory. It takes some attention to detail and dedication for a large mob to organize their farming equipment! There ARE different breeds of angry mobs.

bravo1102 at 12:55AM, April 16, 2020

Honestly I don't think they will be found there. Until at next Thursday when the garbage gets picked up.

Banes at 6:35AM, April 16, 2020

Hahaha!

Kou the Mad at 4:42PM, April 15, 2020

"So how long do you think it will take for them to figure out where we are?" "Depends if any of them have some kind of tracking ability."

Banes at 7:06PM, April 15, 2020

Some high-tech tracking ability-or if they look slightly to their left...

Gunwallace at 4:12PM, April 15, 2020

You have been busy. Loving the updates and the story.

Banes at 7:05PM, April 15, 2020

Thanks. Yeah, I finish a page and I can't wait to upload! A buffer might be a better approach...but this story's been delayed too long already I reckon.

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