ok, i can take critcism now, but you're just plain cruel. have you considered reading the rest of it AFTER my little "not wanting help" phase? if you wanna help people, be a little nicer about it, head... so, i will delete your comment, seeing as i do not want it on my page, with your harsh, un-helpful criticism.
Dark, your a sure fire ass-grabber. I've yet to see you drop anything but a five, and I'm pretty sure that half of the time, if not more, you do it only to generate more hits on your comic. Go you. But guess what, this is DrunkDuck, and the comment box is here to leave, guess what, comments. I know this may be a shock (since you typically drop 5's and nothing else). Frankly, I use the box to leave advice. I've yet to question your judgement (up until now) and the content of your rating. Don't judge mine.
Glad to hear you're gonna work at improving. If you need any help, contact me, and I'll do what I can.
But in my defense, You posted that comment in between when I started writing the comment and when I submitted it.
Oh yeah, and the avatar/name combo is kind of confusing, since neither one conveys a male/female tone.
i also just said i'll start taking advice if you guys shut up!
also, the next few pages will be tests of trying to take the advice, so just be patient while i come up with new layouts, text boxes and stuff like that.
First off, it's 'Capisce' not kapeesh. And even you must realize that the more immature and 'mutey' you act, the more attention you're going to get from us. I'm the nicest person on TASC, so I'm giving you this friendly warning. Listen to advice, it doesn't make you weak or stupid to do so. The people who are giving it are well qualified to do so. We're not out to 'get' you, we're just tired of the flood of sub-par comics. And, unfortunately, this one currently falls into that category.
First off, the layout is very annoying. you might want to, instead of a 1 x 10 layout (10 panels in one column), try a 2 x 5 layout (2 columns of 5 panels each, 2 across, 5 down)
Secondly, I do like the color commentary. It's pretty original, I haven't seen it before at least. But you might want to put it in more panels, to make up for the lack of movement cues. Also, change the camera angle up a bit sometimes, like when one of them is preparing a 'hadoken' or something, double the size of the background and the sprite for a close-up, put in some effects, and it'll really break the monotony.
But above all, and I repeat this because it is very important, Accept criticism graciously, even if you don't use it. I had to learn that lesson myself, so I know where you're coming from, but believe you me; it's not a place you want to stay.
People just leave the kid alone he's/she is having fun are you people insane if you don't like it don't read it He's/or she is happy is there anything better you can do with you life than dump on this kid
ok thats it, youve crossed the line. I tried to be nice but now im just fed up.
1. Its your comic, but it uses STOLEN graphics, whos property is this comic more of?
2. A comic is about devotion, and if you dont have that, then whats the point of even having the comic up and running? Hell, why do you think I dont update my main comic that mmuch anymore? Because im lazy, thats why.
3. saying no advice is more like saying i dont ever want to get any better and im ok with the fact that this comic is just like every other tournament comic, and that its ok that im doing this just for fun because it not like that many people are going to be interested because its just like every other tournamen t sprite comic.
4. Were not whining, were just tired of seeing the same thing in every tournament comic over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over again.
The comic is static. There is a void of movement, speed, and action. Which is bad, considering fights are supposed to convey these emotions. Just because you are doing this for 'fun' doesn't mean you need to underacheive.
The fight is slow, the story barely chugs by, and the speech bubbles could be fixed in a matter of seconds (minutes, at most).
As for the rest of this issue, it's no different from the last. The comic has been so static that I literally thought I was reading the last issue when I clicked on this. I have to go back and compair it to realize that this was a new update. That's bad.
luclucluc at 5:36PM, June 12, 2007
ok, i can take critcism now, but you're just plain cruel. have you considered reading the rest of it AFTER my little "not wanting help" phase? if you wanna help people, be a little nicer about it, head... so, i will delete your comment, seeing as i do not want it on my page, with your harsh, un-helpful criticism.
speedingbullet at 6:19PM, Nov. 6, 2006
ive actually seen him leave a 4, which was amazing considering he ass grabs pretty much anybody.
lefarce at 6:12PM, Nov. 6, 2006
Dark, your a sure fire ass-grabber. I've yet to see you drop anything but a five, and I'm pretty sure that half of the time, if not more, you do it only to generate more hits on your comic. Go you. But guess what, this is DrunkDuck, and the comment box is here to leave, guess what, comments. I know this may be a shock (since you typically drop 5's and nothing else). Frankly, I use the box to leave advice. I've yet to question your judgement (up until now) and the content of your rating. Don't judge mine.
shadowmaster at 5:52PM, Nov. 6, 2006
Glad to hear you're gonna work at improving. If you need any help, contact me, and I'll do what I can. But in my defense, You posted that comment in between when I started writing the comment and when I submitted it. Oh yeah, and the avatar/name combo is kind of confusing, since neither one conveys a male/female tone.
luclucluc at 5:45PM, Nov. 6, 2006
i also just said i'll start taking advice if you guys shut up! also, the next few pages will be tests of trying to take the advice, so just be patient while i come up with new layouts, text boxes and stuff like that.
luclucluc at 5:42PM, Nov. 6, 2006
he or she? you honestly cant tell? is it the avatar that's making you not tell? cause if that's why i'll change it to something more manly...
shadowmaster at 5:42PM, Nov. 6, 2006
First off, it's 'Capisce' not kapeesh. And even you must realize that the more immature and 'mutey' you act, the more attention you're going to get from us. I'm the nicest person on TASC, so I'm giving you this friendly warning. Listen to advice, it doesn't make you weak or stupid to do so. The people who are giving it are well qualified to do so. We're not out to 'get' you, we're just tired of the flood of sub-par comics. And, unfortunately, this one currently falls into that category. First off, the layout is very annoying. you might want to, instead of a 1 x 10 layout (10 panels in one column), try a 2 x 5 layout (2 columns of 5 panels each, 2 across, 5 down) Secondly, I do like the color commentary. It's pretty original, I haven't seen it before at least. But you might want to put it in more panels, to make up for the lack of movement cues. Also, change the camera angle up a bit sometimes, like when one of them is preparing a 'hadoken' or something, double the size of the background and the sprite for a close-up, put in some effects, and it'll really break the monotony. But above all, and I repeat this because it is very important, Accept criticism graciously, even if you don't use it. I had to learn that lesson myself, so I know where you're coming from, but believe you me; it's not a place you want to stay.
speedingbullet at 5:41PM, Nov. 6, 2006
ughh... again with the if you dont like it dont read it phrase.... it sounds more like I dont want to ever get better so back off...
Darkmax at 5:38PM, Nov. 6, 2006
People just leave the kid alone he's/she is having fun are you people insane if you don't like it don't read it He's/or she is happy is there anything better you can do with you life than dump on this kid
luclucluc at 5:37PM, Nov. 6, 2006
FINE! I'LL TAKE YOUR ADVICE IF YOU JUST SHUT UP!!!
speedingbullet at 5:31PM, Nov. 6, 2006
ok thats it, youve crossed the line. I tried to be nice but now im just fed up. 1. Its your comic, but it uses STOLEN graphics, whos property is this comic more of? 2. A comic is about devotion, and if you dont have that, then whats the point of even having the comic up and running? Hell, why do you think I dont update my main comic that mmuch anymore? Because im lazy, thats why. 3. saying no advice is more like saying i dont ever want to get any better and im ok with the fact that this comic is just like every other tournament comic, and that its ok that im doing this just for fun because it not like that many people are going to be interested because its just like every other tournamen t sprite comic. 4. Were not whining, were just tired of seeing the same thing in every tournament comic over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over over and over and over and over again.
lefarce at 5:24PM, Nov. 6, 2006
The comic is static. There is a void of movement, speed, and action. Which is bad, considering fights are supposed to convey these emotions. Just because you are doing this for 'fun' doesn't mean you need to underacheive. The fight is slow, the story barely chugs by, and the speech bubbles could be fixed in a matter of seconds (minutes, at most). As for the rest of this issue, it's no different from the last. The comic has been so static that I literally thought I was reading the last issue when I clicked on this. I have to go back and compair it to realize that this was a new update. That's bad.