Chapter C4: Many More Meetings | Part 1

ccznen on June 13, 2023

One of my writing struggles in this chapter has been to portray Meg's quippy personality without her coming off as rude, dismissive, or completely detached from the situation. Meg generally likes keeping things lighthearted to help cope with serious situations, but showing this without having her be an obnoxious, snotty teenager is definitely a balancing act. I invite reader comments as to how she comes across to you, especially as this chapter goes on.