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Chapter 03, Page 22

Sturstein on Dec. 11, 2010

I want to add some more grey tones and adjust the contrast on this a little more, but I'm happy with it for now.

And I think that's enough ad libbing for now. Next update we'll be back to the ‘official’ script.

Today my copy of the chapter 2 print edition arrived in the mail. The colour is a little off (I'm hoping it's a simple printing error rather than a dodgy file - the colours of issues 1 and 2 match on my screen, but not on paper), but other than that it looks pretty good (and I'm probably the only one who'd notice the difference anyway :P). Ka-Blam have delivered again. But most of you don't give a shit about all that; you just want to know where to get it, right?

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Sturstein at 4:46PM, Dec. 14, 2010

Thanks Wildcard. I've decided to keep my addition short, partly because fights in noir fiction are usually short-lived, but mostly because I've already overstepped my bounds by adlibbing, and I need to get back to Sammi's script ;)

wildcard at 10:23AM, Dec. 13, 2010

Indeed, quite the toughie, looks like Dom was made of sterner stuff though :) I think the extension to the fight worked pretty well anyhow, made it feel like a real struggle given the (questionable) genetic superiority of her foe. Nicely done.

Chapter 03, Page 22

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