I have just read right through your comic. I really like your artwork, it is very good. However, I am inclined to agree with JustNoPoint. Many of the images do not appear to advance the storyline with the result that it appears to move very slowly and at times I really could not follow what was going on. Anyway, I am going to add it to my favourites in the hope that your will carry on. CM
Congratulations on your feature!
I love your art! My only critic is that you seem to use way to many panels that are just text and at times you do not show the actions taking place at all. Like when she sliced the ppl shooting at her early on.
You don't have to show the slash but you need to show us she actually killed them. In silhouette or some other way.
Another example was when she found "the boss". She says it looks bad but you don't even see the boss till several pages later when she has a black cat in her arms. It was quite confusing.
The actual story and artwork are very very cool however so please do not think I am trying to discourage! I look forward to more.
dragonrider at 6:30PM, Nov. 3, 2013
Wonder if she knows Duckie-Poo Sobered up?
Jamie59 at 7:39PM, Nov. 2, 2013
Congrats on the feature. Faved!
Locoma at 7:27PM, Nov. 1, 2013
hey, congrats on the feature! well deserved!
Stig Hemmer at 12:32PM, Nov. 1, 2013
Congrats on your feature!
chis at 9:31AM, Oct. 31, 2013
I have just read right through your comic. I really like your artwork, it is very good. However, I am inclined to agree with JustNoPoint. Many of the images do not appear to advance the storyline with the result that it appears to move very slowly and at times I really could not follow what was going on. Anyway, I am going to add it to my favourites in the hope that your will carry on. CM
JustNoPoint at 10:16AM, Oct. 30, 2013
Congratulations on your feature! I love your art! My only critic is that you seem to use way to many panels that are just text and at times you do not show the actions taking place at all. Like when she sliced the ppl shooting at her early on. You don't have to show the slash but you need to show us she actually killed them. In silhouette or some other way. Another example was when she found "the boss". She says it looks bad but you don't even see the boss till several pages later when she has a black cat in her arms. It was quite confusing. The actual story and artwork are very very cool however so please do not think I am trying to discourage! I look forward to more.