Vol.1 - Ch.1 - Pg.15
EnviousEnvy101 on Nov. 13, 2008
More of silly Trasey and the new smexy one.. XD
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Sand, Comic Sans MS, Vrinda
Wait for the Waiter
EnviousEnvy101 on Nov. 13, 2008
More of silly Trasey and the new smexy one.. XD
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Sand, Comic Sans MS, Vrinda
harryq at 11:50PM, Nov. 15, 2008
Just read through and you show a lot of improvement over a short span of pages. Keep at it and push the envelope. Always push the envelope.
AshleeS at 11:29PM, Nov. 15, 2008
Oh, one more thing--it may be annoying, but it's best to draw your dialogue bubbles. MS paint is helpful, but it makes them pixelated. :)
alejkhan at 10:24PM, Nov. 15, 2008
This seems pretty cute. I like the premise of our voiceless hero! Keep up the awesome. I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes.
AshleeS at 10:09PM, Nov. 15, 2008
SMEXY ONE. XD You'll want to be careful on the necks, though. They aren't bad, but they could use more shape. And the pen looks really nice! A LOT nicer than permanent marker, lol. Waiting fer more~!