Okay must comment here. I love the sketchy style of your art on all these pages. Very well rendered and teh muted textures in the background keep the focus on the action happening with the characters.
However...I would recommend a slightly larger font size for the lecture being given here. I was two inches from my screen and squinting in an effort to read what was being said. Despite the fact that it is "background noise" and not really integral to the story, if you offer it..people are going to want to read it.
That is the only real fault I find with the page, keep up the good work, ne?
Naked_Aya07 at 7:06PM, March 12, 2007
the way u drew this so unique... oh i luv it!!!1
Darwin at 3:03PM, Jan. 2, 2007
Okay must comment here. I love the sketchy style of your art on all these pages. Very well rendered and teh muted textures in the background keep the focus on the action happening with the characters. However...I would recommend a slightly larger font size for the lecture being given here. I was two inches from my screen and squinting in an effort to read what was being said. Despite the fact that it is "background noise" and not really integral to the story, if you offer it..people are going to want to read it. That is the only real fault I find with the page, keep up the good work, ne?
ingrid_nini at 2:52PM, Dec. 30, 2006
lol I love your art !! XDD you're so good ^-^
Brokenhill at 6:51AM, Dec. 29, 2006
yup its a hard life being smarter then everyone else. think I'm the only person to comment about the person under the tree :P
shany at 9:16PM, Dec. 28, 2006
She's so pretty!
Ciel at 8:42PM, Dec. 28, 2006
I could have sworn I'd said something aobut your comic before now!!! But I'm lovin' this page. ^^
magickmaker at 6:02PM, Dec. 28, 2006
I love her hair. Seriously, it is totally awesome.