War Machine 8
Neilak20 on May 30, 2007
Page 8 of War Machine
I dont like the sparcity of backgrounds on this page, nor do I like the action. Its confusing, and with this panel setup doenst convey what's going on well.
War Machine
Neilak20 on May 30, 2007
Page 8 of War Machine
I dont like the sparcity of backgrounds on this page, nor do I like the action. Its confusing, and with this panel setup doenst convey what's going on well.
Neilak20 at 4:58PM, May 31, 2007
Nick: I agree on all points.
Evil Emperor Nick at 6:31AM, May 31, 2007
I think there is a little disconnect in the action. It looks like that tank's turret should have moved more in the last panel to me. Keep the pages coming.