tell what you want in your notes. they are your notes right ? right. I dont see a co writer here.. as my work ties back in to a work that is no longer on the web i to feel that sometimes i need to tell the reader stuff.. they most likly don't know. otherwise i get what is this about comments. and confussed readers are a bad thing.. any way enjoying the story..
Aussie Kid,
You reveal to much in your notes. One of the best things about story telling, comics, books or otherwise, is telling the reader something about a chaacter's background. You however, tell to much background. The fact that he leads a group of vampires should've been an idea that naturally developed in the reader's eyes. Not something you just tell the reader. Imagine if every comic, book, movie had something on the side that gave something away before it happened. There would be no suspense. That is like putting a scene outside the room before a final battle, the reader guessing who the final boss may be, and then the author ruins it by telling the reader who it is. It kills suspense. But then again, this is your comic. I do however like the vampire, werewolf idea. But where are the zombies? Anyway, keep up on the good work.
Fibonacci
P.S. I think the story at this point isn't better than something boring like Hamlet, but its still better than Michael Jackson's career. BURN Michael!
donkas at 3:23AM, May 11, 2006
cool
rmccool at 2:25PM, Feb. 14, 2006
tell what you want in your notes. they are your notes right ? right. I dont see a co writer here.. as my work ties back in to a work that is no longer on the web i to feel that sometimes i need to tell the reader stuff.. they most likly don't know. otherwise i get what is this about comments. and confussed readers are a bad thing.. any way enjoying the story..
Whirlwynd at 11:16PM, Feb. 13, 2006
I like the use of the backgrounds in this comic o_o() I can't believe I actually recognize some of them.
Fibonacci at 12:27PM, Feb. 12, 2006
Aussie Kid, You reveal to much in your notes. One of the best things about story telling, comics, books or otherwise, is telling the reader something about a chaacter's background. You however, tell to much background. The fact that he leads a group of vampires should've been an idea that naturally developed in the reader's eyes. Not something you just tell the reader. Imagine if every comic, book, movie had something on the side that gave something away before it happened. There would be no suspense. That is like putting a scene outside the room before a final battle, the reader guessing who the final boss may be, and then the author ruins it by telling the reader who it is. It kills suspense. But then again, this is your comic. I do however like the vampire, werewolf idea. But where are the zombies? Anyway, keep up on the good work. Fibonacci P.S. I think the story at this point isn't better than something boring like Hamlet, but its still better than Michael Jackson's career. BURN Michael!