Whoa. Thanks. I didn't got much feedback becuase I only have one person commenting at my comic.
And Okay I will check your comics to get some tips. Thanks a lot.
Hello there. You have definitely got an interesting comic going- I really like the dialouge a lot.
It seems to me that the chat bubbles have gotten better, however, Panel 2 is very condensed. You should put a seperate bubble, later, for "Video Please."
Paneling is really nice.
I hope my comics help. I also write comics here, Afterlife by Ettie being my latest project.
Really cool comic! I just thought I might point a few things out here and there!
MegaTuga at 3:52AM, July 11, 2010
Whoa. Thanks. I didn't got much feedback becuase I only have one person commenting at my comic. And Okay I will check your comics to get some tips. Thanks a lot.
Ettie at 5:10PM, July 10, 2010
Hello there. You have definitely got an interesting comic going- I really like the dialouge a lot. It seems to me that the chat bubbles have gotten better, however, Panel 2 is very condensed. You should put a seperate bubble, later, for "Video Please." Paneling is really nice. I hope my comics help. I also write comics here, Afterlife by Ettie being my latest project. Really cool comic! I just thought I might point a few things out here and there!