18 - Sera Videoconference.
MegaTuga on July 10, 2010
Note: I am making several sprites some pages back you should try seek for them…
This was a way I found to have Legends charecters to have their presence here: Video-Conference. But I am inned working on sprites for them.
MegaTuga at 9:07AM, July 12, 2010
@Gustaa: If you are talking about the screen, its because its booting up. If it is because the bubble is way too big well.. didn't find a short way to say it in less words. @Ettie: I tried to make a movement effect so the screen is still lowering down as Sera appears. Its awesome having some feedback, so I can improve the comic. I can feel this comic will come in a great way.
Ettie at 5:34PM, July 11, 2010
I really like the fixes you made! The words appear better when they are not squished into the bubble! Nice job with this page. Some my mini-critique: -The picture of Mother Unit Sera is higher in panel 2, than panel 3 and 4. Was there a particular reason? I actually liked it better in panel 2 at the higher position then in panel 3 and 4. Remember this is really nit picky stuff lol XD the rest of the page was fine. I hope my comments will help you and your comic out. I'm not an expert at spriting or anything, I just notice a few things here and there and I try to help people out, etc. Really do like the story you have, it is very very interesting.
Gustaa at 1:09PM, July 11, 2010
That first panel is a little messy, doesn't fit within the rest of the page. Otherwise nice.