phantomlady4 at 12:23PM, Dec. 19, 2008

Don't worry, Harkovast. Those disappear pretty quickly in the comic. ~Angel~

harkovast at 10:33AM, Dec. 19, 2008

I don't like the creator messages. You should just have one of the characters think these things, rather then having someone step through the forth wall to explain it.

ladyleamarie at 11:28AM, Sept. 25, 2008

I'm surprised the door stayed in it's frame.

Az_the_Wox at 11:04AM, March 24, 2008

Short, sweet, and to the point. A quick episode, but I think all of the "first episodes" for comics just starting out are short. Good work, good coloring, etc. Work on your speech-bubbles, though, try using a circle function in paint or something similiar. Makes a much cleaner chat box. :)