Wingless Ch. 1 Pg. 13
asuna_sakura_chan on March 7, 2006
…Ah. The laziness of the backgrounds…After this page, I kinda took a three month break, and then I started up again a few days ago, so there's a noticiable difference in the style and writing…lol.
Ruka E Pocky at 2:34PM, March 8, 2006
Mmkay. It's true that your proportions could use work,(as mentioned by others on the previous page) but I'm sure you notice that. More importantly, while the shading on the background of this page is nice, (tone goes great with the overall look of this comic) I'd be a bit more creative with them. I know how annoying/difficult it can be to made detailed backgrounds, (And I'm a hypocrit because I half-ass mine all the time) but they really do help boost the appearance of a good manga story like this, and you can have just as much fun with them as you do character design nee? Good sequential story. :3 Makes my heart warm.