Again, on the backgrounds, (And I realize this is redundant since I'm making all these comments in the same day, but I like critiquing things. >>)
You might try to use the manga-esque effect type backgrounds, (like bubbles and stars) more sparingly. Again, I'm a hypocrit because I overuse them too.
Also again, your sequential art is good. Like, just in general, it's good. Clear and fluid. It really brings out the best in your story.
And hey, characters taking their shirts off for no reason is okay in my book. Bwahaha.
-Last sidenote, the 'natto' speech bubble is super nifty. I love how you did that, it works so well.
Ruka E Pocky at 2:38PM, March 8, 2006
Again, on the backgrounds, (And I realize this is redundant since I'm making all these comments in the same day, but I like critiquing things. >>) You might try to use the manga-esque effect type backgrounds, (like bubbles and stars) more sparingly. Again, I'm a hypocrit because I overuse them too. Also again, your sequential art is good. Like, just in general, it's good. Clear and fluid. It really brings out the best in your story. And hey, characters taking their shirts off for no reason is okay in my book. Bwahaha. -Last sidenote, the 'natto' speech bubble is super nifty. I love how you did that, it works so well.