I really like this page! I know it's a year old, so I'm not offering criticism or anything (and I'm too new at this, myself). So, you get the good stuff!
Firstly, Jane on this page is a hoot. She seems kinda scary (calculating women generally are), but she's just very cute here.
And when Davey walks around the hedge and sees Zoe sitting there . . . *sighs* THEY'RE very cute, too. XD
Thanks :) I could try shading, but then I would probably lag in the updates... but I will try to get some shading in, even if there is no flashlight effect needed
Ok finally finnished reading through your archives. Coincidentally you have the same number of comics as me (freaky). It's all really good, both artwise and plot wise.
The page size is a tad wide. try reducing the width to 700 pixels.
Also try shading your characters a bit. I see that you're only colouring them with flat colours.I feel a bit of shade, even if it's only 2 tone would make them look a lot better, especially in the night scenes.
katyas at 6:53PM, May 23, 2008
Hmm - what has happened? Did she spy ... a mouse?? DUN DUN DUUUUUUN!!
Ten chan at 9:18AM, Oct. 10, 2007
I really like this page! I know it's a year old, so I'm not offering criticism or anything (and I'm too new at this, myself). So, you get the good stuff! Firstly, Jane on this page is a hoot. She seems kinda scary (calculating women generally are), but she's just very cute here. And when Davey walks around the hedge and sees Zoe sitting there . . . *sighs* THEY'RE very cute, too. XD
literacysuks1 at 8:23PM, June 4, 2007
ah, I spoke too soon. I really prefer the typed lettering.
mjkj at 2:19PM, Nov. 8, 2006
Great =D And Zoe takes it lightly =P Oh what happens to Missy? mjkj
Tantz_Aerine at 2:01PM, Oct. 27, 2006
Thanks :) I could try shading, but then I would probably lag in the updates... but I will try to get some shading in, even if there is no flashlight effect needed
Mark at 10:11AM, Oct. 27, 2006
Ok finally finnished reading through your archives. Coincidentally you have the same number of comics as me (freaky). It's all really good, both artwise and plot wise. The page size is a tad wide. try reducing the width to 700 pixels. Also try shading your characters a bit. I see that you're only colouring them with flat colours.I feel a bit of shade, even if it's only 2 tone would make them look a lot better, especially in the night scenes.