We've been running since October 10th on Comic Fury and DeviantArt, but only now - the early morning hours of July 24th - are things going up on Drunk Duck. I'll be including both my comments and those of the artist, Adam Cowie, and I'll be updating this in the future alongside those other two sources. I hope everyone enjoys. I will upload Wright as Rayne through the night and the sister story, The Black Princess, will come in the next couple of days. Martin's Comments I kind of like how Misty looks in particular with this one. Got a good handle on her, and the black eye is just displeasing enough to look at.I think Carla's the first person directly referred to by name in the comic incidentally. Don't hold me to that, but I think she is. Adam's Comments At least the art on this is a step up…. The way their legs look is still pretty bad, but the page layout I think came out pretty good. And I do like the way all the characters look. This is the first strip I can look at and not wince in the comic, which is a good sign.As a side note, Misty having a black eye and Carla getting a bloody nose weren't in the script. I just kinda wound up putting those in where appropriate to show they were hurt when hit….
