We've been running since October 10th on Comic Fury and DeviantArt, but only now - the early morning hours of July 24th - are things going up on Drunk Duck. I'll be including both my comments and those of the artist, Adam Cowie, and I'll be updating this in the future alongside those other two sources. I hope everyone enjoys. I will upload Wright as Rayne through the night and the sister story, The Black Princess, will come in the next couple of days. Martin's Comments I thought I had commented on this one - apparently not.In either case, yeah, might see Callous in something or other else next time you see Section 24 together. He's not exactly a flashy guy, but still probably more that could be done with him.Also, Misty seems to take the comedy relief role in the prologue. She's good for it, I guess - she'll probably have a similar role in The Black Princess. Adam's Comments Ah. Here's a fight scene I actually like, especially the first panel with Alex throwing Ellen over his head at Carla. I can't remember if I did the impact-stars or if Martin added them but either way, they look good.I also like how Gaspeed is getting up ready for more in that last panel and how Misty is still untouched. Should mention I don't like Callous's wardrobe. All the other members of Section 24 have had at least somewhat-striking outfits in either color or design, but he's got the blandest possible scheme. Should've come up with something there.Eh. Either way, fight scenes are always fun to draw.