We've been running since October 10th on Comic Fury and DeviantArt, but only now - the early morning hours of July 24th - are things going up on Drunk Duck. I'll be including both my comments and those of the artist, Adam Cowie, and I'll be updating this in the future alongside those other two sources. I hope everyone enjoys. I will upload Wright as Rayne through the night and the sister story, The Black Princess, will come in the next couple of days. Martin's Comments No, I don't know how the front thingies on Alex's hair (that's what they're called, thingies) got totally soaked while the back ones went untouched. Shut up.Anyway, one bit of graffiti here's solely for design, another fits the whole foreshadowing thing I mentioned. Going to stop mentioning stuff like that now, but I mostly thought it bared bringing up in this case. Adam's Comments Not a lot to say about this one besides that while I like drawing John, I don't think he came out so good on this page. I did like the flame effects on his hands, though, or more specifically how they look after Martin colored them.I do recall having to re-do Alex's expression in the last panel, though. He's supposed to look both sad and angry and having no clue how to pull that off, I wound up trying to mix them and his face wound up looking deadpan. When I sent it to Martin, I mentioned I might need to go back and re-do it, and he replied, “…. Yeah. Might wanna do that.” ^^
