We've been running since October 10th on Comic Fury and DeviantArt, but only now - the early morning hours of July 24th - are things going up on Drunk Duck. I'll be including both my comments and those of the artist, Adam Cowie, and I'll be updating this in the future alongside those other two sources. I hope everyone enjoys. I will upload Wright as Rayne through the night and the sister story, The Black Princess, will come in the next couple of days. Martin's Comments Not a lot to say about this one, other than that you get to experience watching Alex, in the body of Dorothy, put on a pair of pants.Yeah… This is one of those updates that probably in hindsight could have been done in one panel instead of taking up a comic for it. Next one's not going to help, as a warning. Adam's Comments Y'know, I gave Dorothy the hair she has now. In Martin's original design she had a very different hair style that I didn't like, so I asked for permission to change it. I drew up a bunch of different cuts for her and he picked the one he liked best- this one.Not the most thrilling page, no. But I've got two artwork nitpicks here.1. That's a tiny, tiny slip of paper. It looks like a business card.2. Does Dorothy not have a belly button? Why can't we see it in panel one?