Theres a couple things wrong here first off...ITS TO FREAKING BIG! Second..You need black outlining on your text bubbles third your bit mixing and your text is touching your speech bubble not good work on the things and it'll look like a better comic.
xx_altair_xx at 9:57PM, Feb. 27, 2007
dude, you pretty much compiled every single anime/manga steereotype into one strip. fuggin hilarious!
eyesoftheblackk at 3:41PM, Dec. 20, 2006
so steve have you ever syrocketed?
twinsayne77 at 3:33PM, Dec. 20, 2006
hmmmm....."Syrocketed"
jim at 1:17PM, Dec. 20, 2006
Theres a couple things wrong here first off...ITS TO FREAKING BIG! Second..You need black outlining on your text bubbles third your bit mixing and your text is touching your speech bubble not good work on the things and it'll look like a better comic.
Rats352 at 1:12PM, Dec. 20, 2006
cool i gess