So here's the deal:
I've been reading webcomics for years, on this site and others, with the ambition of sometime creating one of my own. Well, thanks to a little school project, I finally found the motivation to start one. I figure the best place to start out is DD; it just seems a little more alive than Comic Genesis or other hosting sites. I've been drawing all my life, but this is the first time I've attempted a project of this scale, and as such, I'd love for you guys to show me the ropes and give me a little critique on how to better improve my comic.
In other words,
'Sup?
Meet, Greet, Show and Sell*
Greetings, fellow users
El_Karlos
at 8:37PM, April 23, 2008
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Comic: Bound to Ramble
Art: The-Karl @ DeviantArt
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Custard Trout
at 8:40PM, April 23, 2008
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Hello.
If I say or do anything that could be considered mean and nasty to a whingy, thin skinned wuss, please keep in mind that it is all in good fun and I don't really mean any of it you stupid bastard.
Soon a guy called Renga will be here. Get your noose ready, you'll need it.
If I say or do anything that could be considered mean and nasty to a whingy, thin skinned wuss, please keep in mind that it is all in good fun and I don't really mean any of it you stupid bastard.
Soon a guy called Renga will be here. Get your noose ready, you'll need it.
Hey buddy, you should be a Russian Cosmonaut, and here's why.
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Dark Clown
at 8:52PM, April 23, 2008
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Welcome Would You Like A Cold Hot Cola?
This Fluid feels like Pain, This stoic mood is all in vain.
I reach into the dark, I tear this other me apart.
How many years ago, How many deaths I can't let go.
My Flesh Is Temporary, My God Extraordinary.
You… can''t… Kill… My… MIND!!!!!
The War Will continue, Just on a different battle field
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El_Karlos
at 9:06PM, April 23, 2008
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Dark Clown
Welcome Would You Like A Cold Hot Cola?
Very much so.
Comic: Bound to Ramble
Art: The-Karl @ DeviantArt
last edited on July 14, 2011 12:21PM
Dark Clown
at 9:27PM, April 23, 2008
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Wonderfull. Drink deep its cold hot freshness. enjoy them.
*El_Karlos obtaines 6 Cold Hot Colas*
*El_Karlos obtaines 6 Cold Hot Colas*
This Fluid feels like Pain, This stoic mood is all in vain.
I reach into the dark, I tear this other me apart.
How many years ago, How many deaths I can't let go.
My Flesh Is Temporary, My God Extraordinary.
You… can''t… Kill… My… MIND!!!!!
The War Will continue, Just on a different battle field
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Renga Studio
at 11:10PM, April 23, 2008
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Custard Trout
Soon a guy called Renga will be here. Get your noose ready, you'll need it.
Ha-ha, very funny, Custy! :mad: What if this user was contemplating suicide, huh? Then what?! Honestly!
Hello, El_Karlos! Welcome to DrunkDuck! I'm Renga Studio! :) We'll show you the ropes, alright, but that noose you're holding is definitely not one of them, so put it away! So, you'd like a little critique on how to better improve your comic, huh? Well, I hate to disappoint you, but we're not the people to do that, and here isn't the place to do so either. But a helpful greeter here by the name of Steely Gaze (who'll be appearing eventually) might be able to redirect you to a good place on this site where someone can, and then some! I hope this helps! Well, El_Karlos, good luck with your comic, have fun on the forums, and enjoy the weather! ;)
Renga: How are you everyone !!
Renga: All your weather are control by me.
Renga: I has a weather machine.
DrunkDuck: What you say !!
Renga: All your weather are control by me.
Renga: I has a weather machine.
DrunkDuck: What you say !!
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Custard Trout
at 12:17AM, April 24, 2008
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Renga StudioCustard Trout
Soon a guy called Renga will be here. Get your noose ready, you'll need it.
Ha-ha, very funny, Custy! :mad: What if this user was contemplating suicide, huh? Then what?! Honestly!
He'd be in a better place. A place without you in it.
Also, don't call me Custy. You will address either by my proper title, or Sneeds.
Hey buddy, you should be a Russian Cosmonaut, and here's why.
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Doctor Shadow
at 2:53AM, April 24, 2008
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Welcome to the Duck, hope you have fun here!
A Ronin writer, a masterless samurai of the written word…
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Chronicles_of_Wyrden/
Updating: Thursdays. Now in glorious Ink Wash and Water Soluble Pencil! Reva's note: This is not created digitally, it's all hand drawn and inked.
http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Chronicles_of_Wyrden/
Updating: Thursdays. Now in glorious Ink Wash and Water Soluble Pencil! Reva's note: This is not created digitally, it's all hand drawn and inked.
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amanda
at 8:17AM, April 24, 2008
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Hi! Steely may try to dissuade you from accepting my delectable baked goods, but I assure you - they're full of yumminess and delight and…other things. Also, your comic is looking good - I'll have to pay some attention to it as you progress.
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Renga Studio
at 10:44AM, April 24, 2008
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Custard TroutRenga Studio
Ha-ha, very funny, Custy! :mad: What if this user was contemplating suicide, huh? Then what?! Honestly!
He'd be in a better place. A place without you in it.
Wow, Custy, you're a regular ray of sunshine, you are *sarcasm*.
Custard Trout
Also, don't call me Custy. You will address either by my proper title, or Sneeds.
“Sneeds”? That's not so cute! :/ Tell you what, Custard; I'll stop calling you “Custy”, but only after you drop that dour demeanor of yours when referring to me, m'kay? I'm glad we had this little talk! 8D
Renga: How are you everyone !!
Renga: All your weather are control by me.
Renga: I has a weather machine.
DrunkDuck: What you say !!
Renga: All your weather are control by me.
Renga: I has a weather machine.
DrunkDuck: What you say !!
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Product Placement
at 10:49AM, April 24, 2008
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Oh shit. He drank the cola.
Those were my two cents.
If you have any other questions, please deposit a quarter.
This space for rent.
If you have any other questions, please deposit a quarter.
This space for rent.
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Jabali
at 11:25AM, April 24, 2008
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Welcome dude and have fun.
last edited on July 14, 2011 1:05PM
crazyninny
at 1:54PM, April 24, 2008
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Hello, would you like to joing my cult?
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Steely Gaze
at 3:24PM, April 24, 2008
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Welcome! Boy have things been getting busy in this thread! Well I would advise you to mosey on over to the Hey Everyone Look What I Did! sub-forum, or even tell you to sign up with the Comic Review sub-forum, but you really don't have enough pages to do that yet.
Don't worry. You want some constructive criticism and advice? You'll eventually find it here. But only the most polite of criticism and advice! We don't like flamers here, so you should have no worries. (And judging from your comic's appearance, you wouldn't have much trouble with those negative types anyway. :))
Don't worry. You want some constructive criticism and advice? You'll eventually find it here. But only the most polite of criticism and advice! We don't like flamers here, so you should have no worries. (And judging from your comic's appearance, you wouldn't have much trouble with those negative types anyway. :))
A Roll of the Dice now with full-size pages!
John Clyde now with ten times the tacky Hawaiian shirts!
John Clyde now with ten times the tacky Hawaiian shirts!
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Orange
at 3:53PM, April 24, 2008
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Oh hello there!
Since I'm half asleep I'll jus say hello…
Since I'm half asleep I'll jus say hello…
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El_Karlos
at 5:07PM, April 24, 2008
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Steely Gaze
Well I would advise you to mosey on over to the Hey Everyone Look What I Did! sub-forum, or even tell you to sign up with the Comic Review sub-forum, but you really don't have enough pages to do that yet.
Thanks, I'm only updating it weekly, so it may take a while to get to that point.
Comic: Bound to Ramble
Art: The-Karl @ DeviantArt
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Custard Trout
at 4:57AM, April 25, 2008
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Renga Studio
“Sneeds”? That's not so cute! :/ Tell you what, Custard; I'll stop calling you “Custy”, but only after you drop that dour demeanor of yours when referring to me, m'kay? I'm glad we had this little talk! 8D
Fuck you.
Hey buddy, you should be a Russian Cosmonaut, and here's why.
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Frostflowers
at 6:24AM, April 25, 2008
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That's one heck of a pretty-looking comic you've got, El_Karlos! :) I like the stark colours.
Welcome to the boards - I would warn you not to drink the cola, but unfortunately, it seems you already have (counting down to explosion in three… two… one…). You'll get the hang of the boards soon enough. We're a pretty friendly bunch as long as you give as good as you get.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of you and your comic.
Welcome to the boards - I would warn you not to drink the cola, but unfortunately, it seems you already have (counting down to explosion in three… two… one…). You'll get the hang of the boards soon enough. We're a pretty friendly bunch as long as you give as good as you get.
I'm looking forward to seeing more of you and your comic.
The Continued Misadventures of Bonebird - a poor bird's quest for the ever-elusive and delicious apples.
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Renga Studio
at 7:13AM, April 25, 2008
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Custard TroutRenga Studio
“Sneeds”? That's not so cute! :/ Tell you what, Custard; I'll stop calling you “Custy”, but only after you drop that dour demeanor of yours when referring to me, m'kay? I'm glad we had this little talk! 8D
Fuck you.
Ha-ha! Custy and I are chums! 8D
Renga: How are you everyone !!
Renga: All your weather are control by me.
Renga: I has a weather machine.
DrunkDuck: What you say !!
Renga: All your weather are control by me.
Renga: I has a weather machine.
DrunkDuck: What you say !!
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crocty
at 10:33AM, April 25, 2008
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Now now, Renga, Custy, stop bickering!
Welcome, Karlos, I'm Crocty–…
Sorry, confused myself with Renga there.
…
:3
Welcome, Karlos, I'm Crocty–…
Sorry, confused myself with Renga there.
…
:3
I'm not really around much anymore, but here's my Tumblr, Twitter, and Deviantart. Also if you remember me from back when I was around, I'm sorry.
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deepcheese
at 5:44PM, April 29, 2008
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Welcome to DrunkDuck! Our community is very nice, so I'm sure that you will soon find what you're looking for!
Hope that you enjoy your stay here!
Hope that you enjoy your stay here!
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