What do you guys think of it so far? I would love to know. After all, feedback helps one grow as a creator. Well, constructive feedback does, but I assume nobody is going to be mean-spirited, because I honestly don't understand the fun in that.

Well, I guess I'll respond to my own page: the more I look at it (Tempore from behind looking at the Earth), the more I dislike it. Holy crap does it look bad, and it would have looked better if I just drew it by hand. I don't know why I didn't just go and do that, because it really shouldn't have taken too long.
Oh well, what's done is done. I'm currently working on getting next week's pages drawn, so I'm not worrying about going back. And Friday starts my actual art on the comic (part of the page at least), and from there most every page will be hand-drawn. So if you actually don't want to see any more quick computer pages, that's good news for you.