Hello everyone, I'm getting back into comics after not drawing them for a long time and thought I'd join some forums to talk with other creators and get critiques.

My current project is called Machine World, it's a mishmash of cyberpunk and body horror with some spiritual/esoteric themes, all the good stuff!

https://www.theduckwebcomics.com/Machine_World/
(NSFW for some pages with nudity and gore)

My main gripe at the moment is how I can make my work more “professional” looking so I'd extra appreciate any feedback on that vein!

Nice to meet you all :)

Hey! Read the first chapter of your comic. I'm no professional, so I feel I can't offer any critiques.

I did however really enjoy it! I thought you did a great job. The pencil work is really good, imo. I hope to see more. Time to read chapter 2!

Hi, I’ve reviewed your comic, and I find it very interesting—the story, the pencil work, and the narrative.

You’ve achieved a really nice pencil finish; I’d recommend complementing it with an additional technique, like ink lines or another tool. It’s always good to experiment with test sketches. Traditional techniques tend to look even better when we use a mixed approach.

I hope my comments are helpful!