somebody took my clothes!
purpleglint on Dec. 15, 2008
yeah, i found images, but i like it!its my secon favourite page so far yet to be beaten
loads of times…
keep on readin
purpleglint
ps. malcom competition (LOOK PAGE BEHIND) will end next friday so send your entries by my email or pq me!
MintyMints at 11:28PM, Dec. 16, 2008
Wow. For an 11-year old, you're pretty good! When I was 11, my drawings were constantly laughed at ): I'd really like to see your drawing from paper one day! Get a scanner soon! My only problem with this is the text. Keep in mind that readers want to be able to read without squinting/looking at author's notes! Overall, though, it's a cute comic. XD
harkovast at 6:56PM, Dec. 16, 2008
The characters look a bit too angular. I would try to make them look a bit more organic. Also, don't explain information about characters in the authors notes. Tell in in the comic via what the characters say and do.
yin_yang_husky45 at 1:17PM, Dec. 16, 2008
Cute comic ^^
purpleglint at 12:47PM, Dec. 16, 2008
OH YEA, it sez black leather curtains!