new joes bad day
totallyraddad on April 5, 2016
i got a critique on the forum to use photoshop instead. luckily i was at kyles house and he had photoshop. here you go!
lemme know what you guys think, criticism is always appreciated
joes bad day
totallyraddad on April 5, 2016
i got a critique on the forum to use photoshop instead. luckily i was at kyles house and he had photoshop. here you go!
lemme know what you guys think, criticism is always appreciated
El Cid at 8:40PM, April 8, 2016
The paneling layout's not bad, especially what you did with the last three. The artwork isn't eye-popping, but it can work for a really off-kilter humor strip. Doing a choose-your-own-adventure will be hard to do; you need a lot of active participating readers for that to work, and you don't have that yet. It might be better to start this off as just a regular comic and work in some interactivity later once you have a reader base.