Ok, you see the text? It should be black. ALWAYS black. Or white text on a black bubble. Either way works. Colored text doesnt.
And that jedi dude, he looks REALLY far out of place. You may wish to redo him in the style to go with your comic.
Also the page seems very stiff and forced. Remember, sprite comics are STILL comics. You can zoom in to people and show things differently than a game would. You aren't bound by fixed camera angles.
Falka at 11:15AM, Aug. 1, 2007
You know Rich, whenever I see one of your posts, I always see bad remarks. What's up?
Xacleb the nobody at 6:49AM, May 23, 2007
i'll work on it. and i'll get back to posting comics soon.
ZeroTheHunter at 7:21PM, April 2, 2007
Text= Good.5. Spriting-4.Story-3.5. Overall...4.
Navi_Takawa at 12:43PM, Sept. 10, 2006
What rich said, but not the first paragraph.
Rich at 11:16AM, Sept. 10, 2006
Ok, you see the text? It should be black. ALWAYS black. Or white text on a black bubble. Either way works. Colored text doesnt. And that jedi dude, he looks REALLY far out of place. You may wish to redo him in the style to go with your comic. Also the page seems very stiff and forced. Remember, sprite comics are STILL comics. You can zoom in to people and show things differently than a game would. You aren't bound by fixed camera angles.