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Abt_Nihil on Nov. 24, 2007
I can't really decide whether the sharp transition between this and the previous page has a positive or a negative effect… For this version I decided just to leave it the way it's always been - a sharp transition. However, I more than once considered inserting another page between this and the previous one. I even wrote dialogue for it… I may upload it as a bonus sometime.
And yeah, these are the oldest comic pages I'll ever upload on the ‘net, so enjoy the crappiness :-D
EDIT:
Rockster: Thanks!
Midge: I may be on a chocolate high… or maybe there’s something in my tea :-) The movie is accurate, that's how I envision this sort of scene change too. I imagine a sharp cut from the quiet scene before to the crashing of the doors here… and the audience gets a heart attack ^^
DAJB: Thanks a lot! Let's wait for the reconciliation ;-)
DAJB at 12:30AM, Nov. 26, 2007
I'm with Midge ... nothing wrong with a sharp transition (as long as it's all reconciled eventually!) Oh, and it looks cool, too.
TheMidge28 at 5:10PM, Nov. 25, 2007
crappiness? you are on crack! The sharp transition is very abrupt...and confusing...but I try to imagine it played as a movie...would it flow?