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Abt_Nihil on Jan. 20, 2008
Now when I say that I don't like this page, I mean that there are pages of this comic which I can still live with (like the previous, for instance), but others just look awkward to me - i.e. this one. I don't know what it looks like “objectively” - the subjective value of pages like these is the awareness that I made some progress from then to now.
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DAJB: Awww… I'm not worthy! :-) Thanks a lot!
Midge: Thanks, I see your point and I agree. Funny you're all being so objective today!
TheMidge28 at 6:48AM, Jan. 21, 2008
objectively I like the page and the art and I understand a bit more here than previously. only thing I would change is the head in the top middle. Instead of it being in an oval I would gone for the whole head dangling from the hair being held. but that's me.
DAJB at 6:25AM, Jan. 21, 2008
Objectively? Objectively, it looks great! The minimal use of B&W in the first panel is cool and the final panel is even more so ... Speaking objectively!