o i am giting a litte whell you knao peole ant comeing the see theis dam comic so right now i am geving up in a way or i am not trying as much and tacking a braek fuck this i am cluess what to sae god i nead help on how to do this dam comic right i am so not uset to thess dam comic i have the story line but i do not know how to draw the comic right
You are sort of at a good start.
Dialoge: 4/5 since some of the dialoge is interesting
Art/ 1/5 the art seems to be rushed and seems to have no effort. Also in some scences it is very hard to tell whats going on remember dont rush and think before you draw :)
Story/ 4/5
page setup: 2/5 trust me on this one the pannels are supposed to take up much more space other wise it is just a waste of space to just have 4 pannels on the corner and one in the middle.
I give yhis comic a 2/5 =/.
ceaser at 5:40PM, Oct. 5, 2007
only if mor people will come and see this dam comic
genstru at 5:39PM, Oct. 5, 2007
Remember the head is never bigger than the body.
ceaser at 5:37PM, Oct. 5, 2007
i am so mad this comic is drivung me FUCKING !!!!!!! craesy !!!!!shit this is the hardis thing i ever roet
genstru at 5:33PM, Oct. 5, 2007
BOY I could not agree with you more ceaser you will always suck unless you decide to put some more effort into it.
ceaser at 5:31PM, Oct. 5, 2007
sory about what i put down as a comment
ceaser at 5:29PM, Oct. 5, 2007
o i am giting a litte whell you knao peole ant comeing the see theis dam comic so right now i am geving up in a way or i am not trying as much and tacking a braek fuck this i am cluess what to sae god i nead help on how to do this dam comic right i am so not uset to thess dam comic i have the story line but i do not know how to draw the comic right
ceaser at 5:18PM, Oct. 5, 2007
i know i was anly going to do that 2 times the 3 time will be like your comic
genstru at 3:36PM, Oct. 5, 2007
You are sort of at a good start. Dialoge: 4/5 since some of the dialoge is interesting Art/ 1/5 the art seems to be rushed and seems to have no effort. Also in some scences it is very hard to tell whats going on remember dont rush and think before you draw :) Story/ 4/5 page setup: 2/5 trust me on this one the pannels are supposed to take up much more space other wise it is just a waste of space to just have 4 pannels on the corner and one in the middle. I give yhis comic a 2/5 =/.