Oh, and you title pages look ok, the repeating tiles of the main character don't look too good, and Ash's head cut off on the side in the last chapter doesn't look very good either.
Okay, so don't upload 20 pages in one day, all the chapter pages are fine, just not 10 story pages. You could've have a few weeks at least of free time with premade comics. Also, capitalize the pages the same way for each page correctly. Learn to spell the towns + forests. 'Varidan' is not correctly spelled.
To do with the actual comics: Add some interesting dialogue, save as .png so it wont come out all blurry or whatever you're doing to make it blurry, make textboxes, not just lines, and don't use the exact same pose for 5 of the same type of pokemon, unless they're in some army formation-type thing.The spray-can borders don't look very good either, evenly space panels from each other.
The_Pwnsome at 9:47PM, Jan. 7, 2008
Oh, and you title pages look ok, the repeating tiles of the main character don't look too good, and Ash's head cut off on the side in the last chapter doesn't look very good either.
The_Pwnsome at 9:46PM, Jan. 7, 2008
Okay, so don't upload 20 pages in one day, all the chapter pages are fine, just not 10 story pages. You could've have a few weeks at least of free time with premade comics. Also, capitalize the pages the same way for each page correctly. Learn to spell the towns + forests. 'Varidan' is not correctly spelled. To do with the actual comics: Add some interesting dialogue, save as .png so it wont come out all blurry or whatever you're doing to make it blurry, make textboxes, not just lines, and don't use the exact same pose for 5 of the same type of pokemon, unless they're in some army formation-type thing.The spray-can borders don't look very good either, evenly space panels from each other.