Okay:
Why in God's name is everything so f'in dark? O_o Are you using those black raped Serebii sprites? Don't. Go to a place that actually has usable sprites, like tSR.
Second: Your textboxes need to have white filled inside them, behind the text. And also, your tails need to be triangles, not lines.
Don't use starters, too many people don't. It's been done to death, think up something original for once, kthx D:
Don't make paint brush effects, plz? Use a sprite effect sheet at the aforementioned site of tSR.
And last but not least: Only save as a PNG.
lothar at 7:54AM, Feb. 15, 2023
lol ... so nostalgic
TheFuture at 4:08PM, July 28, 2010
how about making it YOURSELF? I mean smh, I may not be a good artist but at least I can make my OWN stuff. And like kevin said-- WAAAAAAAAY overdone.
Hiron at 12:37PM, Oct. 20, 2007
and another thing hes gonna lose is for a shinx
Hiron at 12:25PM, Oct. 20, 2007
srry this is my 2nd comic im till looking for good sprites and back rounds
KevinClifford at 5:45PM, Oct. 15, 2007
Okay: Why in God's name is everything so f'in dark? O_o Are you using those black raped Serebii sprites? Don't. Go to a place that actually has usable sprites, like tSR. Second: Your textboxes need to have white filled inside them, behind the text. And also, your tails need to be triangles, not lines. Don't use starters, too many people don't. It's been done to death, think up something original for once, kthx D: Don't make paint brush effects, plz? Use a sprite effect sheet at the aforementioned site of tSR. And last but not least: Only save as a PNG.
Walrus at 4:15PM, Oct. 15, 2007
a bit to much wasted space.