hmm...looks...weird....four'd and faved...four'd because the phone looks like its on the floor and theres alot of spelling mistakes...and fav'd because it looks like it might acctually go somehwhere
There's a wall there I just didn't put the phone there.the spelling and grammar errors I was just feeling kinda lazy cuz today is the first day of winter break and I'm really tired.But thanks for the critic I need some
Ummmm...... spelling errors, grammar errors, and is that phone on the floor or on a wall. If so, how come there is no wall..? Please go back and fix that please. On the other hand, I rather like the text bubbles but I wish they had borders around em..
NeonYo at 2:13PM, Dec. 20, 2006
Wow..
evanneo at 4:43PM, Dec. 16, 2006
The phone is on the floor.
sessy6 at 8:45AM, Dec. 16, 2006
hmm...looks...weird....four'd and faved...four'd because the phone looks like its on the floor and theres alot of spelling mistakes...and fav'd because it looks like it might acctually go somehwhere
evanneo at 5:41PM, Dec. 15, 2006
There's a wall there I just didn't put the phone there.the spelling and grammar errors I was just feeling kinda lazy cuz today is the first day of winter break and I'm really tired.But thanks for the critic I need some
Kinuchio at 5:37PM, Dec. 15, 2006
Ummmm...... spelling errors, grammar errors, and is that phone on the floor or on a wall. If so, how come there is no wall..? Please go back and fix that please. On the other hand, I rather like the text bubbles but I wish they had borders around em..
Blk_Wolf7 at 4:40PM, Dec. 15, 2006
forgot 2 rate
Blk_Wolf7 at 4:40PM, Dec. 15, 2006
Thats to bad