Your backgrounds look nice, but the extra space at the bottom leaves something to be desired. You might have wanted to put the note on the side in your comment for the strip.
Try not to fill your word bubbles with red, the thin black text will blend in with it a bit easier.
Your characters kinda speak stiffly. You may want to repeate your dialouge to yourself to see if you like it. If it sounds like you'd say it, it's usually pretty good.
Really it's not too bad a start, just needs work.
BEEP BEEP IM A JEEP at 9:56AM, May 12, 2008
yes, my latias is invisible and pinning him!! HA cause i said to!!
Kinuchio at 8:16PM, Sept. 11, 2006
Sorry for the double post a few pages ago, anyway good job but why is Brock in the Air? Is he pinned to the wall or something *snicker*
soniccomicwriter at 11:56PM, Sept. 6, 2006
ok got ya
Erk at 3:08PM, Sept. 6, 2006
i can tell your getting better, but you might want to try keeping the chars speech bubbles out of their faces.
soniccomicwriter at 11:33AM, Sept. 6, 2006
i forgot to make it white i ment to change it back to white sorry its not to do with me and thanks for wat you think
theduckofanime at 11:23AM, Sept. 6, 2006
Your backgrounds look nice, but the extra space at the bottom leaves something to be desired. You might have wanted to put the note on the side in your comment for the strip. Try not to fill your word bubbles with red, the thin black text will blend in with it a bit easier. Your characters kinda speak stiffly. You may want to repeate your dialouge to yourself to see if you like it. If it sounds like you'd say it, it's usually pretty good. Really it's not too bad a start, just needs work.
soniccomicwriter at 9:15AM, Sept. 6, 2006
pokemon is not its the best