Alternative Ending (1 of 2)

Abt_Nihil on July 8, 2010

To stop the series of death threats I've been receiving ever since I posted the original ending, I am willing to admit that it was all a hoax. THIS is the real ending. As you can see, everything is resolved in a much more satisfying (and, from a storytelling point of view, much more ingenious) way.

Tomorrow: Alternative ending, page two.

Thanks for reading and commenting!


REPLIES:

Nepath: Thanks a lot!

DAJB: Absolutely! This is more like a reader's cut though ;-)

Fitz: That's right, 385 wouldn't have been enough for me to do this. But there was another one, and 386 were just one too many! :P

Jabali & Oriru: Phew, two more death threats averted!

alejkhan: I dedicate this ending to you. :P

man in black, Zephyrion, mmm bacon0: Thanks!