Hoo boy. Capitalize your first letters in sentences. Don't use shorthand, and open characters mouths when they talk. Some pretty easy stuff to fix. :D
That's all I gotta say right now. Ain't read your whole comic, I'll look at it later. Interesting background, by the way.
Jak0070 at 4:39PM, July 21, 2006
hhmmm good
Xergrim at 2:51PM, July 21, 2006
Hoo boy. Capitalize your first letters in sentences. Don't use shorthand, and open characters mouths when they talk. Some pretty easy stuff to fix. :D That's all I gotta say right now. Ain't read your whole comic, I'll look at it later. Interesting background, by the way.