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winzrella on Oct. 20, 2009
Lets see how long I'm able to keep this up. Meaning updating wuite often.
Now with this page I tried something and with the next page I'll try something else and then I'll see which one I like better. It has mainly to do with the background panels.
Be happy that I made this kind of backgrounds on the page! I'm proud myself because I were actually able to do it with out going crazy. (Thought, I simplified them a lot to keep myself from going crazy….)
Peipei: thanks for the five and reading :)
Lehmu: I don't mind you being critical and all, but still I wanted to know why you gave me only a four so that's why I asked. Now I'm satisfied. However, I'll not change the font color for the Finnish!!! XD
EDIT: Thanks to my sis (Lehmu) pointing out some stupid spelling mistakes I have fixed them now. You get spelling mistakes while you read online manga at the same time ^^'
Lehmu at 11:41AM, Oct. 21, 2009
It was almost a 5. But you have English errors :DDDDD You need to proofread to get read of stupid mistakes! ans=and And then that "It's last years of high school" sounds a bit weird... But I'm not sure if it's really wrong but yeah... I really like Amy in the left bottom panel.