Caleb: The dead of space 3/6
Genejoke on Nov. 1, 2012
Sorry it's taken so long, just been busy. Anyway here it is, I hope to haver another page done before the weekend is finished.
After this chapter I will be introducing a 100% new point of view character, although his story does immediately have ties to one of the others.
El Cid at 8:15AM, Nov. 4, 2012
It could've worked either way, actually... I kinda liked "how thick you are!" Sounds more like a doting older sister, though maybe a tad old-fashioned.
Genejoke at 6:36AM, Nov. 3, 2012
typo fixed.
jerrie at 1:30AM, Nov. 3, 2012
5
El Cid at 8:09PM, Nov. 2, 2012
Now they're just being cruel to the little tyke!
Jamie59 at 7:52PM, Nov. 2, 2012
5
Banes at 8:41AM, Nov. 2, 2012
this page really fits this style of rendering well...but it should be "just how thick are you?" not "you are".
chrisdotclark at 3:53AM, Nov. 2, 2012
Five stars
plymayer at 8:34PM, Nov. 1, 2012
6