Chapter 1 - Meeting - Page 4
Chinchikurin on July 15, 2007
I know Koen has changed a wee bit from the last page; i'm not sure on how to draw Koen yet, so he might change a little from page to page.
As always some contructive crit would greatly benefit me ^^
Fitz at 10:24PM, July 16, 2007
The girl's a doctor? Interesting concept! Let's see how this develops. As for the artwork, it wasn't Koen's change (who looks very good, btw) that caught my eye, but Elone's. On this page she looks a bit older than last time. But maybe it's just me - or the fact that her eyes are quite shut, ergo, not as big as young characters usually have.
Rusty Knight at 7:39PM, July 16, 2007
It's cool, if you look at Jim in the first issue of Thompson Gunners, he has green eyes. In the second issue they're brown. He kinda looks girly on this page.