Chapter 1 - Meeting - Page 3
Chinchikurin on July 15, 2007
Yay! Page three ^^ Im really pleased with how the body came out (although, i screwwed elone's face a little and i couldn't draw Koen's hand properly >< )
Well you're meeting Koen! (seeing him at least XD) Isnt he purty?
Hehe Again - i appreciate crit and tips ^^
Fitz at 10:16PM, July 16, 2007
The hand looks good. As for Elone's face in the first pannel, yeah, its profile should look more like Koen's, because he's drawn in a proper manga way: pointed nose, a bit of a retracted chin. Possibly, her eyes should be a bit to the back, not so close to the contour of the nose. But other than that, really marvelous job on this page. You can really draw and kudos to you for doing something you hadn't done previously.
Rusty Knight at 7:37PM, July 16, 2007
No complaints here,