Arrival-4
Kilroy on Sept. 14, 2007
OK, I'm going back to the resized format. The uniform line thicknesses were extremely bothersome to me.
Incidentally, what Enid is saying in the second half of this comic is coherent and completely written out in the notebook where I keep scripts and rough layout sketches (neither of which are legible to eyes other than my own), but I appear to have obscured it too much to be worth trying to decipher. Just as well, she reveals some things I'd just as soon save for later on.
Fitz at 1:36PM, Sept. 15, 2007
Having Enid's monologue as the background all through the remaining panels is a BRILLIANT touch! This episode is just chock-full of punchlines and great ideas!