page two
sandy on Jan. 7, 2006
Same story from the last note. All pages have been redone and some of the dialogue has been edited. In short it's the same story but told in a much simpler format. well some of it is.
sandy on Jan. 7, 2006
Same story from the last note. All pages have been redone and some of the dialogue has been edited. In short it's the same story but told in a much simpler format. well some of it is.
sandy at 4:47PM, Jan. 18, 2007
Erf! Must update. Sorry it's taking so long.
sandy at 11:20AM, Jan. 18, 2006
Yeah, it's a complex story, that's why I have the synopsis on the first page. I wrote this back in higschool believe it or not, and then over the years tweeked it up to a believeable story.
Ozoneocean at 3:15PM, Jan. 15, 2006
The story's good; told well through the dialogue. It's a little tricky to work out what's happening in the first couple of panels though here
usagi_senshi at 1:44AM, Jan. 15, 2006
Love the falling rivet! Also Blaze's SNIDE comment. That'll get someone's attention