Issue 1: Page 3
repoman on April 19, 2009
(Edit: Formerly page 13. Moved 6/25/09)
Another week, another page. I'd like to point out that Lord Quandel in the first panel is the same guy that was abducted and shaved by Cole Montaigne (Dragonstone) in the opening few pages. If you were reading this in one sitting it would be obvious (hopefully) but in this once-a-week-internet format those pages were posted months ago!
Thanks ever so much for the comments last week:
TheMidge28: Thanks. I am going for a “non-Tolkien” type fantasy story so hence I'm using deer as a race. But technically, “Endstone” is really a sci fi story disguised as fantasy.
Heyena H_ll - actually this page was drawn before Skool schooled me on the nose. But it's a valid crit. I'm going to draw Thunderhead's nose lighter, but I've been thinking about just giving her a normal nose and editing what I have so far. It's not too late since I'm just getting started. I thought the nose might look goofy when I designed it, but I was trying to make her look somewhat different from an elf but still give off that fantasy vibe at first glance.
And Doctor Shadow, amanda, darkwaterfey, armandoB, khard12, machinehead, patoborracho, mattchee, matts, theends, Dem, and cyberdog… I really appreciate all of you taking the time to stop by and leave a comment. It keeps me keeping on.
Anyhow thanks for stopping by this week, and I hope you enjoy. . .
harkovast at 7:10AM, May 14, 2009
Pulling the chariots...surely the crappiest job in any army!
chaves at 8:04AM, April 29, 2009
Well composed page.
DAJB at 6:52AM, April 23, 2009
Finally got around to reading the archives (no, I know they're not [i]that[/i] extensive but time seems to be so short these days ...!) Great stuff so far! I've added a link to you from my comic.
Jabali at 12:36PM, April 21, 2009
How did I miss these pages!? Arghhh! I need to read this web-comic from the start. :( Lots of things to do.
ttyler at 8:53PM, April 20, 2009
Nice page.
matts at 6:56PM, April 20, 2009
WOW! Nice evil TMNT rogues! They look scary! ;)
HyenaHell at 5:42PM, April 20, 2009
I think her nose as it is right now is a good "compromise"- it would look too elfish if it were "normal"... but conveying that she's a deer is tough, especially since she's female and you can't use the horns. Probably what i would do (not saying you should) is give her more deer-like eyes- maybe enlarge the pupils, make them rounder. But I'm not sure that'd jive with your style, so I'm gonna suggest you leave it be. :)
thefightingstranger at 2:57PM, April 20, 2009
Death to the toads!
machinehead at 2:49PM, April 20, 2009
Those toad guys just won't give up.
darkwaterfrey at 9:23AM, April 20, 2009
Whoooo! Very nice action! It's making me want to draw epic fantasy battles!
amanda at 9:13AM, April 20, 2009
Great dynamic paneling here, lovely. I read through the archives pretty recently and am proud to say I recognized him. Woo!
armandoB at 9:05AM, April 20, 2009
loving all the carnage
mattchee at 9:04AM, April 20, 2009
Fantasic as always. I'm hoping this sees print one day? Your layouts and designs within the panels. Amazing. Like i said before, i get an education reading your comic!
TheMidge28 at 7:31AM, April 20, 2009
saints of st louis, perhaps?
Doctor Shadow at 1:55AM, April 20, 2009
I love the perspective in the last panel, superbly done.
The Gravekeeper at 10:23PM, April 19, 2009
Bring on the cavalry (sort of)!