cdmalcolm1 at 7:38AM, Nov. 11, 2014

I love how you drew Panel one. Peligroso's face....Love it. "You About Done?" should have been said with that look.

irrevenant at 6:45PM, Nov. 7, 2014

Thank you for the shoutout re: the timeline. :) I see a few of you have been in there updating stuff and it's looking good. The rest of you aren't going to be left out, right? ;)

irrevenant at 5:54PM, Nov. 7, 2014

Kaine! Kaine! Kaine! I have EXACTLY the same problem with shoulders, too - I always draw them too big at first then have to refine them down. -_- Awesome page. Only critique would be that the reading order is a bit confusing at the top (and I might not have noticed that if I hadn't recently had similar issues of my own. :/). Looks good. Your art has improved SO much. I remember back when you were copy-pasting from Heromachine. :)

shastab24 at 3:29PM, Nov. 7, 2014

I need to trim down the shoulders I draw, though. Dang are hers huge on this page.

ironhand at 12:43AM, Nov. 7, 2014

I love the Zombie Queen in that second panel!

Genejoke at 11:14AM, Nov. 6, 2014

good stuff

shastab24 at 10:42AM, Nov. 6, 2014

After CD's heavily-detailed backgrounds, you have... my lack of backgrounds. Exciting!