Chapter 7: The Other Witch pg 13
Vig Starmax on Feb. 21, 2013
Co-plot & script by Gunwallace.
I'm still 50/50 on this page, I was still tinkering with it until yesterday, was not happy with the speech balloon placements. The layout just did not work, so next time I have to really read through the script AND dialogue before blocking the page. Even the colour was looking lifeless, muddy and flat.
Sometimes, you just got to live with what you have.
wildcard at 12:41PM, March 8, 2013
Didn't mind this page at all tbh - and man, Charminx just loves trampling over people's comfort zones doesn't she?
Gunwallace at 11:13AM, Feb. 25, 2013
My fault for writing too much dialogue on this page I think, but the art and colour look great, especially the centre panel (and why does my computer keep telling me the English spelling of English is wrong?)
miamistax at 5:51AM, Feb. 25, 2013
I'm just a little confused by her right boob in panel 1. Good suspense. That would make her a ... What?
SaveTheRejects at 3:20AM, Feb. 25, 2013
Charminx is jealous? something isn't right. Great page~