m8 are you serious?
i dont know if this is serious or if its a joke
on western superGUY Comics.
but yeah your story writting needs work.
and well i thought it was hilarious wich might be bad as you might have made this in a serious sense.
but first of all the Character is so generic and reused several times and its just feels So lol.
and its always 2d side view no overhead views ANd all shots are of kid intense.
like he is the only thing you need be worry about lol.
the dialogue is prolly the funniest ive ever read aswell hilarious stuff.
i mean how stupid isent kid i mean pollution is something pollution man or what ever has to do.
hes a villain right? i mean does he need more then his will do to evil.
i mean its not like he needs motivation for what he does or.
that you instinuated his powers of kid befor hand no you took into account that we KNew this guy like you did.
wich makes this comic even more funnier.
and the action in this comic is stunning.
But.. really i dont know im being mean i dont know its prolly wrong of me to clatter about it but ive given you some major THIng to think about in making A working comic.
this works if you were pulling someones leg but the more i think about it your not.
maybe read less superman and look at others work.
Mistchiff at 7:00AM, May 23, 2007
m8 are you serious? i dont know if this is serious or if its a joke on western superGUY Comics. but yeah your story writting needs work. and well i thought it was hilarious wich might be bad as you might have made this in a serious sense. but first of all the Character is so generic and reused several times and its just feels So lol. and its always 2d side view no overhead views ANd all shots are of kid intense. like he is the only thing you need be worry about lol. the dialogue is prolly the funniest ive ever read aswell hilarious stuff. i mean how stupid isent kid i mean pollution is something pollution man or what ever has to do. hes a villain right? i mean does he need more then his will do to evil. i mean its not like he needs motivation for what he does or. that you instinuated his powers of kid befor hand no you took into account that we KNew this guy like you did. wich makes this comic even more funnier. and the action in this comic is stunning. But.. really i dont know im being mean i dont know its prolly wrong of me to clatter about it but ive given you some major THIng to think about in making A working comic. this works if you were pulling someones leg but the more i think about it your not. maybe read less superman and look at others work.